Story Structure & Revision
Bring clarity, momentum, and purpose to your writing
If you’re stuck in revision, unsure what’s working, or overwhelmed by structural questions, this 1:1 session is designed to help you move forward with confidence.
Pauline works directly with writers to diagnose what’s happening beneath the surface of a draft — structure, pacing, voice, and narrative flow — and helps you make intentional revisions that strengthen the work without flattening your voice. This is thoughtful, craft-driven guidance focused on progress, not perfection.
Whether you’re working on fiction, memoir, or narrative nonfiction, this session helps you see your writing more clearly and revise with purpose.
What You’ll Get
- Clear structural insight into what’s working and what needs attention
- Actionable revision guidance you can apply immediately
- Support with pacing, scene shape, and narrative flow
- Voice-preserving editorial feedback that strengthens style and clarity
- 1:1 guidance from an experienced editor and writing coach
Who This Is For
- Writers revising fiction, memoir, or narrative nonfiction
- Authors stuck in the middle of a draft or revision cycle
- Creatives seeking clarity and confidence in their storytelling
- Writers who want constructive, supportive editorial feedback
Session Format
- 15-minute, 30-minute & 60-minute private 1:1 session
- Bring pages, excerpts, or a specific revision challenge
- Live, focused, and grounded in your actual work
- Leaves you with a clear revision plan and next steps