Query Letter Review & Agent-Level Feedback

Strengthen your query before it reaches an agent’s inbox

In this focused 1:1 session, Andy will review your query letter in advance and give you clear, candid feedback from a literary agent’s perspective. You’ll learn what’s working, what’s weakening your pitch, and how to sharpen your letter so it clearly communicates your story, your voice, and your market potential.

This is not a generic writing critique. It’s a practical, agent-level evaluation of how your query will land in a real submissions inbox — and what you can do to improve your odds before you hit send.

Andy has represented bestselling and award-winning authors across fiction and nonfiction for decades. As the founder of the Andy Ross Literary Agency, he has helped launch and shape numerous successful writing careers and knows exactly what agents look for in a strong, compelling query.

What You’ll Get

  • Pre-Read Query Evaluation — Your query letter is reviewed in advance of the session
  • Clear Strengths & Gaps Breakdown — What’s working, what’s confusing, and what’s holding it back
  • Actionable Revision Guidance — Specific suggestions to improve clarity, hook, and positioning

Who This Is For

  • Writers preparing to query literary agents
  • Authors who’ve received rejections and want sharper positioning
  • Fiction and nonfiction writers seeking agent-ready submissions

Session Format

  • 30-minute or 60-minute private 1:1 session
  • Query letter must be shared prior to the session
  • Direct, honest, and practical agent-level feedback
  • Leaves you with clear next steps for revision and submission

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