Your vision for your story is clear, but does the structure, voice and emotional depth resonate on the page?

In this 1:1 session, Sarah will work with you to understand what your narrative is doing well, where it’s struggling, and how to elevate it with intention and artistry.

Drawing on her experience as a published novelist and short story writer and award-winning writing instructor, she will help you gain confidence in your craft and vision. Together, you'll clarify voice, strengthen character arcs, deepen emotional logic, and ensure your narrative momentum keeps readers turning pages.

This is a writer-centered deep dive, supportive, honest, and designed to provide tools for streamlining your process and strengthening your final draft.

What You’ll Get

• A developmental evaluation of your story’s structure, pacing, emotional arc, and clarity
• Feedback on character motivation, voice consistency, and narrative tension
• Insights on strengthening scene work, story rhythm, and thematic resonance
• Clear, personalized next steps to revise with confidence
• Insight into your writing process
• Optional reading recommendations & craft tools tailored to your specific project

Ideal For

• Fiction and creative nonfiction writers shaping a draft
• Authors struggling with structure, voice, or emotional continuity
• Writers preparing to revise before querying or publishing
• Anyone needing thoughtful, high-level story guidance from an experienced instructor

Outcome

A deeper, clearer, and more powerful understanding of your story, with the confidence and direction to revise it into the strongest version it can be.